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Presenting The Present by ~eleaphotogirl:iconeleaphotogirl:



Dreams of past and future.
Our heads are someplace else.
Never in the present,
Because the present don't exist.
I know that it's improper,
But I really just don't care.
My heart is full of lead,
And my head full of air.

The truth is arbitrary,
Because all the truths are lies.
We live inside a world,
That lives while it dies.
Our lives are subject to,
Our fancy and imagination.
What once was false is true.
Its all a juxtaposition.

Paint the world in colors;
That just don't exist.
Paint by numbers sucks,
But abstracts more like it.
What future is impossible,
Just isn't right.
We live in our dreams,
Because we don't know how to fight.

Loving is just a phase.
That we will all grow out of.
They say its about commitment.
I say its about despise.
We never take off our mask,
Because we just love our disguise.
Living isn't easy.
If we open up our eyes.

Living in the present,
Just can't be true.
What we think of we thought of.
It all revolves around you.
Because the world is our own.
At least thats what we think,
But hearts are full of lead.
And lead surely sinks.
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inspired by :iconfaultylogic:'s journal

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:wow::clap::glomp:

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.

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lol thanks. I always write better when I am about to faint of exhaustion.

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If ever there was a representation of my future it would probably be an airplane crashing into the earth from a round of friendly fire aimed by the inventor of the nuclear bomb frying his eyes out. =)
O.o
Oh snap did you seriously write this in the short time after which you read the randomness that was my journal?!
Ah! I love it :heart:
"My heart is full of lead,
And my head full of air."
Haha you have so many awesome quotes in this poem xD
Definitely agree with what you wrote :nod:
Excellent piece :#1:

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I am the sum of a lifetime of errors
And I forgot to mention that I love the title
It's perfect

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I am the sum of a lifetime of errors
lol yeah.
I speed write thing otherwise if I spend too much time on it it turns crap.
thanks your words helped a lot.

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If ever there was a representation of my future it would probably be an airplane crashing into the earth from a round of friendly fire aimed by the inventor of the nuclear bomb frying his eyes out. =)
gah my brain comes up with interesting things at night...

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If ever there was a representation of my future it would probably be an airplane crashing into the earth from a round of friendly fire aimed by the inventor of the nuclear bomb frying his eyes out. =)
haha I can be the same way too
When I write it tends to be a burst of it and once it's over I stop
haha thanks well I'm glad that my somewhat mindless babbling was helpful =]

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I am the sum of a lifetime of errors
haha yeah
I think that I like the way my brain works at night better than during the day
it's more interesting xP

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I am the sum of a lifetime of errors
lol, so do i for some reason!

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.

=RawEm0tion
~Lyrics-Community

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